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Crush

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Literature Text

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It's not like you try. Not
for summer in your heart, not for
breezes. But not for nothing is spring
the time of take off into the
hot months of flight.



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suggestions on lineation?
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coolweirdo's avatar
It's not
like you try.
Not
for summer
in your heart,
not for breezes.
But not
for nothing
is spring
the time of
take off
into the hot
months of flight.


yet i think it's okay the way you wrote it.